Open Letter to the Free Software Community

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 [![Libreboot
 logo](logo/logo.svg "Canteloupe, the libreboot mascot"){#logo}](logo-info.md)
 
-[Downloads](download.md)                --
-[Documentation](docs/)                  --
-[Donate](donate.md)                     --
-[Buy libreboot machines](suppliers.md)  --
-[Report a bug](tasks.md)                --
-[Submit a patch](git.md)                --
-[Hardware Compatibility](docs/hcl/)     --
-[Installation Guide](docs/install/)     --
-[Mirror](rsync.md)
-
-Libreboot is a [free](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_software) and Open Source BIOS or UEFI
-replacement; libre *boot firmware* that initializes the hardware and starts a
-bootloader for your operating system. [Watch our FOSDEM 2017 presentation about Libreboot (speaker is Leah Rowe,
-libreboot's founder)](https://video.fosdem.org/2017/K.1.105/libreboot.mp4)
-
-Libreboot is a long-time member of the [Peers
-Community](https://peers.community/) project, an organisation that supports
-Free Software and provides infrastructure, e.g. [Git
-hosting](https://notabug.org/).
-**[We call on AMD to release source code and specs for the new AMD Ryzen
-platforms!](amd-libre.md)**
-
-Questions? [Read the FAQ](faq.md) or
-[join](https://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=libreboot) IRC for general
-support questions. You can also [contact the developers](contrib.md). [Sign up
-to our newsletter for release announcements!](announce.md). We also have a
-subreddit forum, for development discussion and user support:
-[r/libreboot/](https://www.reddit.com/r/libreboot/).
+[Downloads](download.md)                                                    --
+[Documentation](docs/)                                                      --
+[FAQ](faq.md)                                                               --
+[Donate](donate.md)                                                         --
+[Buy libreboot machines](suppliers.md)                                      --
+[Contributors](contrib.md)                                                  --
+[Report a bug](tasks.md)                                                    --
+[Submit a patch](git.md)                                                    --
+[Hardware Compatibility](docs/hcl/)                                         --
+[Installation Guide](docs/install/)                                         --
+[Mirror](rsync.md)                                                          --
+[IRC](https://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=libreboot)
+
+Libreboot is a [free](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_software) and Open
+Source BIOS or UEFI replacement, initialising the hardware and booting your
+operating system. We are a member of the [Peers Community](https://peers.community/)
+project, an organisation that supports Free Software.
+
+%%UNITYLETTER%%
 
 Why use libreboot?
 ------------------
 
 Many people use non-free proprietary boot firmware, even if they use [a
 free operating system](docs/distros/). Non-free BIOS/UEFI firmware often
-[contains](faq.md#intel) [backdoors](faq.md#amd), can be slow and have
-severe bugs, where you are left helpless at the mercy of the developers;
-*you have no freedom over your computing*. By contrast, libreboot is
-building a world where everyone can use, study, adapt and share
-software, with true control and ownership over their technology. **In
-other words, you should use Libreboot for your freedom's sake!**
+[contains](faq.md#intel) [backdoors](faq.md#amd), can be slow and have severe
+bugs, and you are left helpless at the mercy of the developers.. By contrast,
+libreboot is fully free software, where anyone can contribute or inspect its
+code.
 
 Libreboot is faster, more secure and more reliable than most non-free
-firmware, and can provide many advanced features (such as encrypted
+firmware, and can provide many advanced feature, like encrypted
 /boot/, GPG signature checking before booting your kernel, ability to
-load an OS *from the flash chip*, and more).
+load an OS *from the flash chip*, and more.
 
-Libreboot's main upstream providers are
-[coreboot](https://www.coreboot.org/) (which we deblob, for hardware
-initialization), [depthcharge](docs/depthcharge/) (bootloader, and
-default libreboot payload on ARM), and GRUB (bootloader, and default
-libreboot payload on x86). We also integrate
-[flashrom](https://www.flashrom.org/Flashrom) (for installing
-libreboot), and several of our own utilities, scripts and configuration
-files. All of this is integrated into a single, coherent package that is
-easy to use. We add our own patches to the various upstreams used, and
-where feasible try to merge upstream as much as possible.
+Libreboot's main upstream provider is coreboot,
+[coreboot](https://www.coreboot.org/), which we deblob. We upstream our custom
+patches to projects like coreboot, depthcharge, GRUB, and flashrom where
+possible. Together, we provide an automated build and installation system with
+nontechnical documentation, allowing Libreboot to be widely used. 
 
-Libreboot provides a fully automated build system and installation
-process, with documentation written for non-technical users, in an
-attempt to make the software as easy to use as possible. ROM images are
-provided, along with utilities, all built from the publicly distributed
-source code.
+[Watch our FOSDEM 2017 presentation about Libreboot (speaker is Leah
+Rowe)](https://video.fosdem.org/2017/K.1.105/libreboot.mp4)